Damnit mindy.... you make me wanna have my first kiss real bad now.

haha.. juss kidding. good poem.

Haha!! well adorable poem, but honey if you're expecting THAT on your first kiss, you're going to be sooooooo let down! first kiss is awkward, a quick pec, innocent, usually not a frenchie, and giggly... trust me, it's not passionate, but they get much better as they go, don't worry!!!! cute poem 5/5

Wow!
I loved this, it was so cute.
My favourite part of this was the wording you used, I enjoyed it muchly.

Cute.
Made me smile, while reading it! =]
You dragged me in from the first stanza, wonderful job writing this one.
Great flow and the imagery was amazing!!!
Loved it, keep it up! 5/5

Stephanie

Good words...I like it...