WOW, i really like this poem! = ]
Its way good
Keep it up hun
Much love
xxBonnie

"i never thought true love could be this hard"

So true hun. It's the main heartache of being in love.
You had some great words and some fab messages in this poem, the only thing that needs changing is some of the spelling errors, once they get ironed out, you'll have a diamond of a poem =)
5/5
*Gem*