Serendib is right. This poem was very imaginative and so creative!
The rainbow concept is amazing
Well done
5/5
*Gem*

Well done my friend! Great idea. The poem flowed nicely. Couldn't find a favorite stanza as I loved each line.
Wonderful!

I really like this poem.....
it portrays desire and " I will get to you" type of love...
good work..

Beautifully penned heartfelt write. Very unique. 5/5!

This is so sweet and beautiful. You have captured the imagination so well in this write, Loved it!

Gd

Gd