Nice poem, only thing I would edit is instead of "make sure you ok" to "make sure your ok"

OMG! ney ney what happend? e-mail em and tell me everything ok? luvs u
-sda-
xx

Hey..this poem is really good..im sorry that had to happen.mwa

Oh yeha you got nothing to be sorry for babe.. hes the loser not you..
love you
-xx-