I love it and i love you.
True love is me and you forever!
*Gem* xxxxx

I THINK THIS POEM IS SO SWEET...AND U BOTH SEEM LIKE UR TRUELY INLOVE AND OVER THE PC I CAN TELL U BOTH R..I THINK THATS WONDERFUL THAT U BOTH FOUND TRUE LOVE..AND GOD BLESS U BOTH..AND MAY U LAST FOREVER AND FOR ENTERNITY,,,GREAT AND WONDERFUL POEM

Nice

Congrats on making the top love poems bbz.
I love you loads and loads!
Keep up the fab work honey!
*Gem*
XxXxXxx

Ohh so ur gemmas marcus lol lol awesome lol lol ur fiance is such a talented writer..this is awesome...well keep it up

lissa

Awww, his poem is so sweet. Great job! Keep writing. ~samantha`

Heya your fiance rocks, congrats on ur wedding, u guys are awesome!!

~amore

Awww..how cute

Aww.how cute of you

This is such a beautiful and wonderful tribute to the one you Love! Excellent writing!

I love it!Its so true! Great poem!

Awwwwww... this poem is sooo sweet!!!!

Aw well done bbz!
14 comments!!
I'm so proud of you =)
Love you xxx

Aww cute

Aw thats so cute! keep it up you really have a knack for making the simplest words beautiful

Erin :)

From these poems that I am reading that you write with/for/about her are really amazing! I think it would be safe to assume that she is really lucky to have you. Great job! 5/5

~Kat~

Wow amazing, i wish every guy were like you, or of what i can tell by this poem... congrats on u and gem, u really seem in love, i hope it all works out for you, and lasts forever! great poem! i loved it!!

I like this. It's sweet.

And while I'm commenting, I wanna make two points about my poem 'Evil Twin'. I'm not being mean here.

1- Actually, we are identical. It's even worse that way, because ppl get us pixed up.
2- I put it under love poem? That was probably habit. I write alot of love poems.

Thanks for commenting, though. No one ever does.

So you're Gems Marcus. :D

You did a wonderful job writing this poem, I'm sure a lot of people can relate to it. It was cute.
When I seen 'true love' written over and over, I thought I'd hate the poem, or the flow would be messed up. But, I actually liked it said over and over, it went perfectly with the poem.

Wonderful Job.
5/5

5/5 i loved how you wrote this!!