Comments : Found Me In You

  • 14 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    That was very good! It's not like you to not write poems that are 4 lines each but this definately worked and I LOVED the last line. Great job!
    ~Midnight Sun

  • 14 years ago

    by Romantic Lover

    Very touching. Very nicely written.

  • 14 years ago

    by Gem

    Different from your normal poems but still incredibly good! You used some excellent words in this one! Very moving indeed.

    "In this rush of life, I was lost in the crowd
    But your hand guided me out."

    It's just that couplet that threw me off a bit because it seems kind of stilted. But i can't think of anything that would sound better so i'll leave it for now ;)
    Superb love poem =)

  • 14 years ago

    by x.Athame.x

    Absolutely stunning, an amazing work. Hope to read more of your work soon, you have such talent. Best wishes, and Blessed Be. *5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Cindy

    What a wonderful poem! I am really glad I got to read this! Excellent job!

  • 14 years ago

    by Hott Mama

    Awww.. its so sweet and romantic, you did a good job writing this and making it rythme so beautiful! Keep it up and good luck on your writing. Also thanx for your comment on my poem .:*.

  • 14 years ago

    by Kenneth

    Very good.. i loved it 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Very good write. I agree with Gem on the one couplet:

    "In this rush of life, I was lost in the crowd
    But your hand guided me out."

    Maybe use something like:

    With a touch from your hand, you guided me out.....

    Just a's still a marvelous love poem, full of imagery and emotion....5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by samie

    This poem i can relate i love it keep the poems coming!!!!


  • 14 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    This is great. 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Tristan

    This is a very cute poem..very meaningful
    keep up the amazing work...

  • 14 years ago

    by TaNyabAbEE

    It's really good. i can really relate to it, and i'm sure everyone has fallen in love once, and known these feelings. it's really amazing, there's nothing i would change about it. keep it up!!:)

  • 14 years ago

    by Jamica

    Excellent write. I enjoy reading your stuff. Keep it up!

  • 14 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    COMMENT # 3

    aww.. this is soo cute.. simple but still strong.. the emotion is great and the last line is killer.. another spectacular one

  • 14 years ago


    Wow, so dang powerful. Didn`t expect that ending, at all. Every line in this piece just screams the emotion, I love it.


  • 14 years ago

    by Boy

    Lovely writing style. strong emotions and image you hae put here. excellent piece of work

  • 13 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    A nice, simple, soothing piece. I particularly liked the lines 'It's not what you said, but all that you do' and 'Fall into my lap, spill from my mind', the latter especially, it was wonderfully worded.