Comments : They love what you dont see

  • 17 years ago

    by Kenneth

    I could not think of a better name.... if anyone has some suggetions let me know please... i tried to make this poem different from the others tell me what you think please

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    That was a nice poem and so true how some fall in love with love but not who their with. Good point...your rhyme scheme was a bit lost, but i did like it.
    Charisma*

  • 17 years ago

    by ShAtTeReD HeArT

    This is a very truthful poem and i know from experiance cause when i was hurt i would love anyone who treated me well and a never knew there was someone there for me all along but hun this is a great poem 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by The lil angel

    Aww wonderful poem loving it and thank you so much 4 the comment it means a lot