Comments : With You Gone

  • 16 years ago

    by geeeeee

    "The glass of our memories is polished
    with forbbiden salt teardrops of heartache
    that I have wept since you left my grasp.
    With you gone my heart beats dust,
    but my soul seeks your lust."

    This overall was one of the most amazing poems I have ever read. It was so descriptive and moving, really got me thinking. The imagery was breathtaking. You have a unique style of writing and I really enjoyed reading your work:)

    Take Care.

  • 16 years ago

    by SweetElectric

    That was so sweet....very powerful and like Makaveli said it also got me thinking...very emotive and expressive words