Wow those last 3 lines are exactly how i feel..good job on this poem..you've touched my heart and i am sure youll touch others..julee*ann

ALL of that fits me but the last 3 lines. Wow...thats really good!

~Shae

[Wow..] that's all there is to be said. Great job!

Humm. im going to be honest im not sure if i like this one but i think
the only reason i might not like it is b.c my bf killed himself ..and im not crazy bout the last couple lines=/ .. but other wise i like it alot .. alot of ppl feel what u wrote and the fact that u can put it all together and on paper is great 4 you! =] 4*5

WOW...spectacular work. thanks for the comment. but geez...the detailing was amazing..and just everything! keep it up! 5/5

WHOA!! that was really good and so true great job!
~*~Niki~*~

All your poems have touched me, i hope your sister and boyfriend are better because of your other poem.
you have amazed me with every single word in your poems. 5/5

That was excellent! I really like your poems you have a great flow in most of them I've noticed. So far this one is my favorite. Keep writting because your great at it!..

Congrats on 2nd place in the contest!
Rachel.

WOW!! wow this is such a great poem words can't explain how good it is great job 5/5.
*~Kelsey~*

This is freaking awesome!!!!!!
i honestly mean that.
so many of us are that kid.

Wow, you really do have a talent for writing. this is so good. it sounds like a poem that should be read out world wide to let adults now how us kids feel. you have really made it perfect. well done! take kare x x x

Here's to the kids' -----amen to that!!!

if only everyone in the world was aware of some of these issues or even better did soemthing about them.

great write and great topic

Wow!!!!! that was deep