The flow on this threw me a little, but apart from that I think it was good.
I thought it could have been a little longer so you could add more depth and feeling to it, but, overall, good job.

I like this one... because its pretty much the truth... there are tons of guys like this

I loved it.

It was cool! I know someone exactly like that!

I really liked this poem as it was short and to the point! Your work is really good i think i may add you to my favourites :)
5/5

Powerful punch in few lines great job