I love this poem. Another 5/5. I think that it is great the way that it is. Keep up the good work. I love your poems.

Very nicely written. I loved it. It was a bit short however, I'd like to see it maybe a little longer. The flow was good and the strucutre was ok. Great Job!!!

Peace, Joe

Definitly my favorite.. and yes its a cliche idea.. but i dont think cliche ideas are bad its how you turn it into a poem.. and the poem is very original.. in the way it was written and the words you chose...

I love love love it!!!! Its kinda sad, but thats what made it good :)

Amazing poem keep up the great work

I love it!