Suggestions? I have none! ;P This was an excellent peace, and I can say I know where you're coming from. I really liked the ending!!! Keep writing!! Take care,

`Poetess`

Sorrrry. I meant to say *piece. =]

Oh i liked it. I get it. I especially liked the beginning:
'The danger in crossing the line of friendship
Is that once you're over, it's soon erased'
this happened and that friendship never went back to the way it once was. It was lost. Brilliant poem.

Kelly
xx

"The future now includes two people
You don't see yourself as one
The conversations grow deeper
Surpassing childish fun"

I loved that stanza because it has two sides to it. It can either be a bad thing that your losing the childishness of the fun you used to have as friends or it's a good thing that you've found something deeper and can progress on that.
And now i sound a lot older than i am and i've scared myself lol.
But seriously. Great poem this one. I can't think of any suggestions =)
5/5
*Gem*
(and yes, it was meant to say flower... flowed beds.. lmao!)