Wow.. this is an amazing poem.. i cant believe no one has voted or commented on it yet.. i am in love with in.. and i LOVELOVELOVE this line "you bleed just to know you're alive" like wow! ahh its just a really strong line and i like it alot.. you have talent, keep up the greeat work and thanks for the comment on my poem =)

Awe *tear* this is a really good poem! i really like it!

xoxo kisses

This poem has a lot of emotion in it...I LOVE IT!! you are an amazing writer! keep it up :)

Thats So Good

Wow! This is such an amazing poem! I love the way you structured it because it gave the poem a sort of voice.
"This time you really are alone" - A very powerful line
Well done!
5/5
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This one was awsome kool. x