Nice poem. You need to work on your wording a little bit. When you said "Now I want to spend every hour
Every minute of every day
I love when we're together
You made me realize that there is amazing, but
There can always be better." you never said you wanted to be with hi. I knew what you meant, but, it is somthing I would consider fixing. Just wannt help you out.

~Dallas~

Other than that, it is a great poem. Sorry that this is two comments. Forgot to add this. LOL. PM me and we can talk about your poems or poems in general some more. :D

A very beautiful poem full of feeling.