Comments : We Fell Apart

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    This is a beautiful poem. very sad, and beautiful! Great writing!

  • 17 years ago

    by Whisper

    Are you trying to make me cry? That's a really good piece of writing. Never give up writing, ok? You have an amazing passion and you can never let it go. Wonderfully done.

    ~Casey J.