The strongest love is a love we can't describe amazing write 5/5

Wow, I actually liked karl's comment. That really does suit this poem. Well done.

This is a very good poem, it has a great flow, i give it a 5/5!!! keep it up!!!

Thats so sweet. I wish my little brother was little like that. Maybe be then he'de be more lovable. It did kinda seem like you were struggling for words, and that you had a lot more then you wrote to say. On a lot of poems this doesnt work and makes it not so great, but here I think its works. It really helped to get your point across.