Awesome rhyming. The rhythm was perfect- and thats my favorite thing to criticize =D. The storys real easy to understand and your so good at love poems. I envy you. Very much.

So sad yet so well written. Your pain comes through in your words. Excellent!

Wow..i love the rhyme scheme.. beautiful rhythm.. love the word choice.

"Its not easy bearing the words
when she told me she loved me not,
slowly my mind begins to realize
what it had only just forgot."

One of the hardest things to know in life is knowing that the feelings you have for someone else cannot be returned. This was a really touching yet sad poem.

Take Care.

God. your poems just take my breath away! another amazing one. 5/5
<3 locamente enamorado <3

Wish someone wrote me like that kind of poetry hehe u really have a great imagery nice expressing ur love to the sky and etc..wonderful work of urs.. just keep on writing all what u feel and im sure u really inspired. love it!5/5