This was a very nice poem, very heartfelt, well thought out... but you shouldn't be afraid to tell her what's wrong b/c you don't wanna lose her... if you two are really in love, you'll be able to talk it out calmly and rationally. nice poem! 5/5

Very good job on your poem. I truely enjoyed reading it. You can feel your love coming from the words you have written Excellent job!

Need to fix those slashes, but this is a very good poem, i notice you have it twice on your profile, great poems, 5/5!!!

Wow i liked the emotion and honesty you put in..good job! 5/5

Wow i liked the emotion and honesty you put in..good job! 5/5

Wow i liked the emotion and honesty you put in..good job! 5/5