Interesting concept and nicely written. Very well done.

Drink and driving is wrong.
It's plain wrong. Once you've had a drink you should never get behind the wheel of a car. just walk away.
Excellent poem showing the outcome and the consequences.
Well done!
5/5
*Gem*

This is really good

Ohhh this is so sad, and true. good job. i've read some of your other poems and i like your style a lot.