It shocks me that this poem has such a low rating. This poem was great, and not only that, but the openning stanza was superb and intriguing. This poem had a great flow, and the wording was excellent. Very creative and intelligent. There were several stanzas that stood out from the other wonderfully written ones. They were the first, forth, sixth and seventh stanzas, but my favorite was stanza six, with the openning stanza not far behind. I loved the way the creature (Loneliness) spoke, and I loved the innocence of the child. In my opinion, this was a fantastic poem, well done, and I hope you're proud of it.

Brad

P.S. Thanks for commenting on my poem 'My Sleeping Beauty'.

Thnx for your comment, I really like the way you right stuff its good, reads well to. laura xxx

OMG! i absolutly love it! beautifully written!

5 stars!

Very well written
it was amazing
-deadbeatromance

WOW AmAzInG

Wow this was very nicely written, I love the words and the rythm, and the way it is so true!

I realy impressed frm ur poetry... aaah.. such a gr8work...i imressed..