OMG I love it i am goin through dis so i can totally relate i have got to add you to my favorites add me if you like my stuff! Keep it up!!!!

"This crack you have placed inside my soul
Please fill it with you so I can be whole"

You've used some very emotive wording in this piece and those two couplets struck at my heart for some reason.
I can relate to them.
Well done on this. It's full of emotion which is something every good poem needs.
5/5
*Gem*