Wow very nice piece! I really enjoyed it! keep up the good write>

Beautiful. You are a true romantic. The words you write any girl would love to see and hear those words written for her. Excellent job!

Awwwh, this was really sweet, I really enjoyed it.
I thought the whole piece flowed very well.

Just wanted to say nice poem i also wrote one that had as much feeling. I can tell that you are somewhat like me and are a pretty emotional guy. Keep it up.