I really like this one.
It's short yet beautiful.
Wonderful job.

Comment #3:
I know a lot of people tend to look over the smaller poems but for being so short it painted a pretty big picture. Loved it! :)
~Midnight Sun

Good job. This form is hard because you have so few syllables to get across your message. Well done!

Very talented indeed! i am so pleased with the description of the poems as well, what form they are in. that is very helpful!

Bryan,
You do such a excellent job with your formed poetry. Something I know nothing about. LOL Very beautiful!

Ha i love it keep up the good work

Interesting and wonderful! 5/5

This is beautiful I think u might want to add other verses to this and make it a longer poem just a suggestion

I really enjoyed this. I love nature poems and haikus have such great imagery. This one had a really nice flow and it worked really well. I had the image of autumn (what we call Fall in the UK) kinda defeating. giving up. Good wording. Enjoyable haiku. :) Keep writing! xx

I like the way you use different styles of writing, not many poets experiment like this.
this is yet again, a very good piece. It's hard to make a short poem work like this one does!
beauty!

~* Natasha *~