A beautiful poem:) good work

Fourth stanza: your < you're.

You did an amazing job with this poem. I have a poem named 2cd place. haha. it's totally different, is a love poem though.

I loved this poem, a lot. The emotion, flow, rhythm, and rhyming were perfect.

Keep it up, hun 5/5
<3 Teria.

I didn't see that ending coming...I thought the ending was going to be happy...
I liked the rhyme scheme you used, I don't think I have read any of your's with this rhyme scheme before.
Flow was good throughout, the pain and emotion are clear for the reader to see and the imagery is beautiful.