Comments : She thought her life was perfect.........

  • 17 years ago

    by hisbabygurl

    Wow intense !

  • 17 years ago

    by x.Athame.x

    A gripping, and powerful write that calls to the heart. A wonderful piece of sad poetry. Thank you for your kind comment on my work, and I hope to see more of your poems soon. Best wishes, and blessed be. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by A New Beginning

    Great job. Good emotion. and nice way to end.

  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Intense is right.
    I can relate to this, it's sad to say I can. Embarrasing to be able to relate, I hate cutting yet I don't want to stop at the same time and I have yet to understand that.

    Anyway, this poem was very good! I love how you ended it and it's true cutters are always who you expect. Wonderful job, keep it up! 5/5

    Stephanie

  • 17 years ago

    by AliveAndEmpty

    I realy like it. When I said what I did before, it didn't come out how I meant it too. Sorry about that. Anyway, I can really relate to this. Its really good.

  • 17 years ago

    by Freddie

    Wow! thats so cool! I luved it!

  • 17 years ago

    by Gracie Danielle

    Its good. I like it a lot. i know how that all goes.