It flowed fantastic and the rhyming was perfect,ive been in a similar situation but i was the older man....ur 18 so whats age matter???

* i like this poem aLOT! great job!

* 5/5. AMAZING! And such a great poem with feelings and hidingness.

*Again the flow and rhyme scheme need work but I especially like this stanza:
Forbidden love so hard to hide,
if I could push my feelings aside,
I know my love must never show,
oh, the curveballs it will throw

And the repetition of said stanza. Nice job!