Even sadness could be expressed so beautifully & who else could do better than you.. :o)

Great write dear
Angels are proud of you..:o)

all the best and take care

And beautiful yet sad and very heartfelt poem. very deep and powerful very well written also. xx

Brang tears to my eyes.. alot of emotion showed.. amazing work as always Gem, great job 5/5

~[AnotherDream]~

Omg, this poem is perfect! I loved it! The flow was perfect and the rhyming was flawless!
xoxo

You are a wonderful writer! That made the tears fall. beautifully written! Great job!

Wowo very touching in more ways then one nad great poems no matter how many times u read them touch u every time and in new wasy eachtime..great job hunnn

lissa

Wow this is really good and really sad also. I almost cried reading this! 5/5

I love this..
only because i can relate my mommy passed away...to
but it is gorgous as of all your poems
xoxo

"You see Mommy is an angel
Amd she lives up in the sky
She's always watching over you
So baby, wipe your eyes"
i really like this part

This is so sad. I lost my dad so this really pulls at my heart. I got a divorce when my daughters were very young 4 and 2. They did not understand. Thank God we have shared parenting. Great job on the poem

Words can't express how much this poem meant to me. Exceptionally written. Wonderful!

Right nowim going through a hard time ive lost my mom cuz of family problems and i cant say that i now how you ment cuz i dont and i do cuz i dont live with my mom ....but its a good poem i love it good work!

lola

Wow.. i get tears in my eyes from this one. I can really really relate to it, because my mom died when I was 4... keep it up! *5/5*

B A U TEE FULLY written. I felt that way when I was 7..... u found the soft spot with that 1.

This poem is really sad ( 0.s i actually read it 3 times) It touched my heart so much but the 3 times thing is true i really love it its so emotional and sad and it brought tears to my eyes to imagine me in the girls place and what her father said hurt so bad when i read it .
xx roxy xx great work

Oh wow thats an absolutly amazing poem. your an amazing writer. that has a lot of emtion, and i can relate totally, its just my dad is gone not my mom. well my mom is sorta gone to she left me when i was 6. keep up the amazing work. you are a very inspiring writer

xoxo
-chelseaa;;