Comments : Destruction (after death)

  • 17 years ago

    by UglySkeleton

    Thanks for the comment!
    I love this poem of yours. It's really really good. Seriously. I can imagine it somehow.

  • 17 years ago

    by Aussie

    WOW, u can truly paint a photo:)

  • 17 years ago

    by xPerfect Chaosx

    Wow, this poem is beautifully written, it really paints a scene, so full of emotion!!!!
    The vice kills the sun,
    on twilight's shadow it feeds.
    Fall into despair,
    paper dancer bleeds.
    Morbid.
    Surreal.
    That is just so beautiful. Amazing!!
    Keep up the awesome work, I'm waiting for another awesome poem!!!
    Thanx for the comment, it means a lot!
    Much Love,
    ~*Danielle*~