Excellent 5/5

Hey darl there was alot of emotion in this poem. very deep and powerful. a very touching piece. it was quite sad and i loved the words u used. very well written. thank u for the comment on my poem. meant alot! xx

Hey !
thanks for your comment to start off.
I loved this poem ! exactly the type i like to read,.. filled with sorrow,.. and perfect riming sceme,..
i liked "And any day now, she will shatter deep inside
From herself she has no true place to hide" i can partially relate to this poem.
so a 5/5 i'm giving you.
Keep on writing, so will i
Roy

"And any day now, she will shatter deep inside
From herself she has no true place to hide"
i loved those 2 lines especially =]
Really good poem =] quite abit of emotion in there too
~*~Jen~*~

I love this.So deep and dark.Words so powerful, very well chosen. Deserves a 5/5

P.S I'm very close to you in age and I put you in my favorites.

Wow so sad but really good,5/5

This is so sad but so real. I’m sure a lot of people could relate to a lot of those feelings in there. i especially liked these two lines...

It is so well written and is a perfect way to describe those feelings. Well done I love your work =)
-em

Great poem!!! extremely emotional!! i luved it!!! keep up the great work
5/5
Luv FallenxFromxGrace