Its really good!5/5

Thank you Allie. You're a very good writer as well.

There isnt much to say......its a great poem.....very well done..keep up the work.....5/5

Mmmm......nice.
thanks

Wooooow.... very nice poem!

Awwwwwh!
This was so very sweet, I absolutely loved this, the first few lines had me hooked, and I didn't want it to end, but when it did I wasn't disappointed.
Wonderful work.