Really sad. Great unique poem.
You might want to organize your poems alittle bit more just to make it flow. Overall it was wonderful.
God Bless 5/5

~*Tay*~

It's an ok poem. Not the best i've ever read. It needs more... flow...

Good job though.
4/5
~Stevie

It's an ok poem. Not the best i've ever read. It needs more... flow...

Good job though.
4/5
~Stevie

I think this was really good,i can relate.
raelly good write.=]
--lexie

p.s. thanks for joining the fiesta!

I thought that you could add more into this, to give it more depth and meaning.
I enjoyed the wording used, but the structure threw me a little.
Apart from that, I think you did a good job.