I really liked your descriptions and wording! You really managed to paint a picture in my mind! Good write! ^^
5/5

Interesting poem
You made an impressive description of the black widow
I changed something at Untitled... I think it's ok now :-?
anyway... excellent job ;)

Very descriptive...it was wonderful once again. *sighs* by now you can tell I have like nothing to do in the morning except read wonderful poetry and wait for 5:30 to come around so I can wake up my step-sisters (which one of my darker poems are about...hehe)
infinite/5

~*Katie*~

Great Job..This Poem Is Really Really Good..It Makes Me Feel Mischevious and Naughty...But I Don't Know Why.....