This is a great poem, very greatly written, and a true emotion. well done. a 5/5 from me

the only change you should make it the last line of first stanza, there is a small typing mistake,

Oooh, that is a good song. And a pretty good poem too. 5/5

Awww.thats so sweet. it must be a great song, cause its a really sweet poem. great job.
xo~crissy

Well i think its very good keenan, great flow, i give this poem a 5/5!!! keep it up!!!

Lol i knew this sone man and yeah this was a good song

MUST be a nice song! Cause this is G.R.E.A.T! Nice flow! Very well written. And yass there's a small typo error on the last line of first stanza> OTher than that everything was great as usual! Well done! And keep up the great work!

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^_^Luv Sux

4 a second keenan,u scared d shit outta me,its a good poem,well written,gosh u beta at it than me.lol.ttyl hun.Kate