This poem could use a little more structure, but it was great i lo ve reading your work and i have you on my favorites list :)

Will you please comment on my poems?

Great job...I agree with lina please comment bak if u hav time! :)

This one's great. And you're only 13! I'm impressed!

Great poem, like people said before maybe a bit more stucture but still fantastic!
---tara