Yay! I finally got first comment!
And this poem was worth the wait, it's so sad yet the ending holds a note of happiness?
It might be the way i'm reading it..
But excellent flow! Thats what i like to see from you!
Well done hun!
5/5
*Gem*

Yeah, new poem!
Your peoms are always excellent, you really put everyting you have in to them. This poem is sad and i hope whoever it is realises what you are saying. Sounds cheesy , but things happen for a reason. I hope it has a happy ending for you! Take care.

Kelly
xx

Aww i loved it, as i do with all your poems =]=]=]
~*~Jen~*~

So small but mix wth so many emotions. i like the ending. AWSUME job:)

Hun you're an amazing poet... remember you can ALWAYS email me and I'll be there. =) I love you

Hey! I haven't talked to you in a long time! I wrote a poem for you...it's not too good...but please read it, it would mean a lot to me if you did...thank you buh-bye
Burning~Wings