I like your poems... this one is sad... and thanks for suggestion... im new to poems.. and suck at english so its amazing that i have made any good ones... they all are either what i feel... or how this girl i love feels... i try to make them to help her... and suprisingly it seems to work

Oh my god.. you made me ruin my eye make-up for work!!
This poem was just so sad, it almost sounded like a child pleading..
Such depth in the words...
5/5
*Gem*

I love this!
Its very sad and you can feel the emotion!
5/5
xoxo-am

This is a sad one for me to read. I see so many elderly patients who are ready to give up, but their families aren't willing to let them go. Don't know if that is what you were writing about, but I can relate. Good job. 5/5