Very deep, sad..powerful and emotional. I love it. I can sense the angry in it. Keep it up 5/5

That's deep.
Really loved the ending.
Keep writing :) x

Damn...
loves it...
it is very emotional...
i'm digin' it

xXx
miss lostXinXlife

Woah....
such a good poem.
I really liked it, and i noe someone who can relate to it.

Great poem, I loved your use of emotion..x

Woah this was SO powerful! :-O
I really really liked this you put so much emotion into it! Keep writing please you're so good

This is an friggen amazing poem. i wish i could write like that, if you truly wrote this girl, you've got talent!!! But sadly thats exactly how i feel thats probably why i like it so much