Comments : The pale queen of the silent night

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    So deep with great flow + perfect word choices.
    I am speechless.

  • Thank u mr.wonderful...i my self am very speechlessssss.....everything came to an end
    :(

  • 16 years ago

    by all knight

    When I looked into your eyes deep inside
    I knew you would shy away so I could not decide

    You were so close yet i felt the distance
    your simile glowing smile made me blind

    you expressed your limitations i felt like a prisoner
    I am a rebel who would refuse to set any limits between us

    Like a rebel who thinks he is fighting for the cause
    My cause is you and it is only you

    Its all new fresh like a blossom
    this bond needs care, sacrifice and attention

    But what this sacrifice entails is beyond my imagination
    You made yourself clear that this bond is eternal

    Who cares, when we depart as long as you know you are my part and i`m yours
    The fountain, grassy green steps, the sound of train, the chirping of birds they all witnessed

    I held your hand and unwillingly say " I think I like you" then I regretted as I could say I love you
    This waste of words was a form of question, no response every second I was waiting for your answer

    Upon my insistence you expressed yourself
    I did not feel it as it did not come from within