Wow, thts really good, im so jealous. i totally can't wait to read more!
*Shawte*
ps. i think thts like really sexy, i could actually see everything, lik as if i was there or somethin

JeALoUs!!!! How is it that one person can write so well?! So not cool!...well, it is...I'm just so JEALOUS! You are really very good and your writing is amazing. Thank you for commenting, it means so much to me...buh-bye!
Burning~Wings

Omg... i LOVE reading ur poems... u r SO deep!!!!!
i give it 10 hearts