You have talent

I like it keep it up
:) check out my poems too
thanks

It's short; but gets the point across. The rhyming seems forced, but I like this =]

[5/5] babyy
-Stina.x

Mark, this poem is excellent.
I gave a five.
Sad.

5.5

Take care,
N-G-C-S.

Mark, I loved it! Nice flow, and emotion! GREAT WORK!!! love you! 4.6/5

I loved your poem.In my opion, the last stanza was the best, but the whole poem was quite good.You have real telent! :) 10/10 Well done!

Ooh... i felt that one... few words but it went so deep... nicely done... i hope you overcome your sadness... keep it up...

~angel~

Omg!! another sad poem....excellent job! i like it!

Omg u do really have talent i gotta give my man mark props keep it up
I LOVE IT