Haha not bad bro, great flow and meaning she'll like this one 2 excellent job 5/5

This would be a very nice starter poem but it lacks something I don't know but it doesn't come off the page. It just seems as if it is flat words, no emotion, even though it's obvious ypu put a part of your heart into it.

Was the extra repition of I'll never ask for more done on purpose? It seems to take the impact away when used more the once. Maybe describe the rose in detail or how much this love means to you. Do not just tell that you keep a rose to remind yourself it's true show that with your words without saying it. Do not say the rose is just white maybe the white color is a symbol for innocence or a quality she reminds you of. Keep writing.

This is gorgous!
So much love through out each stanza!
5/5
xoxo-am

Awwww. That's such a sweet and beautiful poem! I absoultly loved it!
Keep up the awesome work!
5/5 God Bless

~*Tay*~

-Can you please check out these two poems? One to Blame and I'm good enough? It would mean alot.