Comments : Over Da Years

  • 17 years ago

    by xPerfect Chaosx

    It's a good poem but in the beginning, I don't think it flows well. If it were me I would change Over the years we stuck together like glue but know i don't even know you. To Over the years we stuck together like glue but -now- i don't even know you. It just seems to flow a little better. Overall though it was a good poem. Thanx for the comment on my poem!!
    Much Love,
    ~*Danielle*~