Comments : Jazzlyn

  • 17 years ago

    by debbylyn

    It's hard growing up in today's world. We can only hope Jazz will choose the right path. Nice job on the poem 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    You are a natural! Great job. None of us want our children to make our mistakes. All we can do is pray and hope. That they have learned what we have taught them. excellent writing

  • 17 years ago

    by TRAGiC BEAUTY

    Is Jazzlyn your daughter? Such a lovely tribute to someone! Lovely job on this poem! Great rhyming and flow!
    xoxo