Wow this poem is amazing very powerful with every word, excellent job 5/5

Short and to the point
And what a point you made!

"Such is now the ugly tale
Of a demon's pride and fall."

Your wording was spot on with this, you really got the poem to flow like water..
Well done, brill!
5/5
*Gem*

Wow, Hannah... you're getting better... jsut sitting here reading this, its GREAT. You're better than me now. 5/5

Although very short it was very likeable! The flow and rhymes made it easier to read and the first stanza, I think, is the best!
Good write!
5/5