Kid you got some skill keep it up..

Wow thats deep, but I like it I know how that is i give it 5/5 keep up the good work

Laura

5/5 excellent poem. i can relate to what ur saying. i hope things are better for u

Saddd.
I like it.
Gave a 5.

Take care,
N-G-C-S.

I can relate to this poem, one of my favorites, 5/5.

I LOVE IT!!!!!

Simply put...

Love, Grace.

WOW! Thats all I can say! Great write! keep it up!

It's nice, the ending is great! lol i gasped!!! Just one tip which you don't have to use but don't force the rhyming sometimes it sounds to clique!

Good poem though!

This is good i can sense ur emotions stay strong -well done

Wow! this is so good. your a great writer.