Comments : Perfect

  • 17 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    Aw... this was a really sweet poem. It flowed really well. Makes me wanna go hug my boyfriend lol. good write!! 5/5

    marcella

  • 17 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Very well written, the flow as well as the structure were both great. The rhyme scheme was good as well. You are a talented writter, keep up the good work.

    Peace, Joe

  • 17 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    Are you dating the same guy as me, because I could have swore MY boyfriend was the sexiest guy alive lol.
    Anyway, just to clarify a "cliche" poem means a poem with a very common and over used subject, which is also written with no originality, or imagination, and is the same as every other love poem...no new ideas etc.

    ok this was a sweet poem...a little cliche I guess...but hey...
    Sorry, but I didn't understand what he was going to quit, (on the fourth line) I hope this isn't forced rhyme.
    Loved the bit about being blonde in the thrid stanza, it made me smile because I'm blonde and know exactly what you mean lol.
    Anyway take care, keep writing.

  • 17 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    Really love smelling stanzas there are

    I love the feeling I get
    When I look into your eyes
    I love how tight you hold me
    When you say goodbye

    I liked it,good job 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Sandra D

    Ooh, silver J,
    when i said he was never going to quit, i was referring to the previous line about him being polite... so i meant tht he was never going to stop being polite.