I like the way u write your poem.. love it... :D

I luv ur style, keep writing! ur realli gud!

I like the rhythem but the last line in the first stanza kinda through it off, the poem is good though, wheres home S. Africa or somewhere else???

Great poem Narcissa, capitalize the (I's), other than that its perfect, 5/5!!!!

I can't really understand this poem, never liked my father very much. Nevertheless, well writin, very good poem. oxoxoxoxo :)

A very sad poem. Very, very sad. I felt as if it was coming from your heart. It feels like your heart is ripping from you while you are writing this. Great writing. 5/5, Keep up the great work!!.