Wow... great job... you're very talented... plz check mine out and return the comment and vote... plz... luv lucy xxx

This is a very feeling write. Good job.

I really like this.. and its got great flow.. but i think its more of a quote than poem

Again i forgot the * oops lol

* Again, this is another short poem that doesnt have enough feelings put into it.

* There is a thin line between love and hate. You show that here.