OH MY GOODNESS!!! This poem was so incredibly AMAZING! How'd you do it???? It's words strike to the heart, it's structure, though different, is beautiful and easy to follow. I absolutely loved this poem! One of the neatest I've ever read, and truly heartwrenching. Good job! But if this is you...keep going strong! Life is worth it!
Charisma*

OH MY GOODNESS!!! This poem was so incredibly AMAZING! How'd you do it???? It's words strike to the heart, it's structure, though different, is beautiful and easy to follow. I absolutely loved this poem! One of the neatest I've ever read, and truly heartwrenching. Good job! But if this is you...keep going strong! Life is worth it!
Charisma*

Oh wow! So sad and yet it is true for some. I was lucky when it came to a good mother. I feel bad for kids who have parents that act like they are not there. Very sad poem.

This is really different from your other work. And yet you still manage to amaze me. Lol. I really liked this. And I can kinda relate to this in a way. Well, take care and keep writing! Love,

`Liz

Nicee onee...=]] 5/5

Wow shocking, that was so amzing, loved how u used her life in it then how if affected yours its good stuff 5/5

This is great excellent write. This poem shows that a mother must balance her work and family. By putting her true job first, being a mom.