Thats realli sad! Nice free verse tho! :)
XOXO Freddie

Thats really good, it made me sad, but happy at the same time (i don't know how to explain it) great job!!!

*Shawte*

I really love this poem it has alot of emotion put into it. it's really moving!

leah

Very nice its exactly how i feel please comeent mhy poem "stop with the lies" and if yoo could 15he10i and 1everyone plz thanks luv yoo biee